Every day, after Melanie gets home, I go through her folder. Today I found two versions of a story she is apparently working on for school. I loved them both and decided to put them on my blog so I can save them.
Draft 1:
If you give me a cookie, I will go crazy and do a happy dance. I hope you give me a sugar cookies. I am going to eat a cookie with Mommy because she is so so nice. Me and Mommy are eating a cookie in the living room. It is fun to eat cookies.
Draft 2:
If you give me a cookie, I will go crazy and do a happy dance. I hope you give a warm and good sugar cookie with pink frosting and rainbow sprinkles. I will eat my cookie with my beautiful Mommy. Mommy and I like to eat cookies on the ceiling. I love, love to eat cookies!
Melanie is my future author!
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